Hiding Place Essay (Lucy Anton)

The Caged Bird by Maya Angelou is a poem that talks about a bird struggling in its captivity. It wants to be free. The poor bird wonders what life is like outside of the cage. Every day the bird hopes for a better tomorrow.

The Hiding Place by Corrie ten Boom is a remarkable true story about Corrie, the main character, who was arrested for helping the Jews during World War ll. Fighting to survive, she and her family get sent to the concentration camps in Germany where they are held captive by the German soldiers.

The Caged Bird and The Hiding Place are extremely similar. Both talk about being in captivity and hoping for a better tomorrow. They both acknowledge the fact that they feel like there is no way out. In The Caged Bird, it says “The caged bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still.” Both the bird and Corrie are filled with fear about the unknown. They both long for the life they once had.

Freedom is a major theme for both The Hiding Place and The Caged Bird. Freedom is both very important to the bird and for Corrie. They both long for the freedom they once had. In The Caged Bird it says, “his tune is heard on the distant hill for the caged bird sings of freedom.” This states that the bird is hoping for freedom in the midst of trial. A similar statement from Corrie ten Boom appears in The Hiding Place that says, “Forgiveness is to set a prisoner free, and to realize the prisoner was you.” This demonstrates how Corrie felt the pressing need for freedom.

John 8:36 says,  So if the Son sets you free, you will be free indeed.” Therefore, real freedom is from Jesus. When you understand what Jesus went through for you, it changes how you view freedom. So, whether you feel freedom on a vacation or you don’t feel freedom in a concentration camp, it doesn’t change that we are free from our sins because of the incredible love of Jesus.

 


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4 responses to “Hiding Place Essay (Lucy Anton)”

  1. jackattack11 Avatar
    jackattack11

    I liked the last paragraph about Jesus being real freedom.

    I noticed that you made your essay clear and easy to read.

    I wondered where in The Hiding Place is the quote you included.

    I would suggest writing a little more on the main theme of The Hiding Place.

    Strong words or phrases were, “A similar statement from Corrie ten Boom appears in The Hiding Place that says, “Forgiveness is to set a prisoner free, and to realize the prisoner was you.” This demonstrates how Corrie felt the pressing need for freedom.”

  2. Aiden0803 Avatar
    Aiden0803

    I liked… the Bible verse that you used

    I noticed… that you put a good amount of detail in the essay

    I wondered… more about the the poem

    I would suggest… just mentioning the free birdwhen describing the poem

    Stong words, phrases, and literary divices were… “So, whether you feel freedom on a vacation or you don’t feel freedom in a concentration camp, it doesn’t change that we are free from our sins because of the incredible love of Jesus.”

  3. Tony Mazzella Avatar
    Tony Mazzella

    I liked your bible verse

    I noticed that you thought that the main theme of these two story’s was freedom but I think that the hiding place is about faith

    I wondered what your favorite bible verse is

    I would suggest adding more detail about The Hiding Place

    Strong words or phrases where “Forgiveness is to set a prisoner free, and to realize the prisoner was you.”

  4. Sarah Pring Avatar
    Sarah Pring

    I noticed: Your explanations of the book and poem, they were very easy to follow.

    I liked: And your final paragraph where you talked about how real freedom is through Jesus.

    I wondered: If there were any other themes that you noticed?

    I would suggest: Maybe talking about the free bird in the poem, so the reader can contrast the difference between the caged bird and the free one.

    Strong Words, phrases, or literary devices were: Therefore, real freedom is from Jesus. 

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