Hiding Place Essay by Aiden Taylor

The Main theme of the poem “The Caged Bird” is hope. For example, “The caged bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still and his tune is heard on the distant hill for the caged bird sings of freedom.” This third verse says his tune is heard on a distant hill, meaning there is hope of somebody rescuing him. The poem also has a vision of sorrow that the free bird is unaware of.

The Hiding Place’s main theme is having faith through challenges. The main character Corrie has to have faith in God even though she goes through the toughest challenges a human can face. Her Father dying, having to save the Jews’s lives from the Nazis, and going through years of sorrow in concentration camps during the war. She had to put her faith in God to give her strength, and hope of stuff to come.

A similar thing about these stories is that there is hope through darkness. There is the hope of someday escaping the dark place where they are kept against their will. What makes the Hiding Place different is that it’s about putting your faith in God, not yourself.

We all know how the caged bird longed for freedom “The caged bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still and his tune is heard on the distant hill for the caged bird sings of freedom. The caged bird longed for things unknown and the bird was singing about freedom. “Oh, this was the great ploy of Satan in that kingdom of his: to display such blatant evil one could almost believe one’s own secret sin didn’t matter.” This quote from the hiding place says that it is tough to have thankfulness, forgiveness, and godliness when your freedom is kept from you but it is easy to hate, blame, and have selfishness. 

2 Corinthians 3:17 Now the Lord is that Spirit: and where the Spirit of the Lord is, there is liberty. This states that the Lord has given us liberty through the Holy Spirt. So remember that even if you are a slave you have freedom when you pass through the gates of heaven.


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4 responses to “Hiding Place Essay by Aiden Taylor”

  1. lucyabigailanton Avatar
    lucyabigailanton

    I liked that you did a great job explaining about the Hiding Place!

    I noticed how structured it was. It was really easy to read and there were no grammar mistakes.

    I wondered why you chose the bible verse? (I love that one)

    I would suggest adding a little more detail in the first paragraph when you talk about the Caged Bird.

    Strong words or phrases were 2 Corinthians 3:17 Now the Lord is that Spirit: and where the Spirit of the Lord is, there is liberty. This states that the Lord has given us liberty through the Holy Spirt.

  2. I liked how descriptive you were.

    I noticed how well you explained the hiding place.

    I wondered how do you see the main theme of the Caged Bird as hope?

    I would suggest double checking your last paragraph for more commas.

    strong words, phrases, and literary devices were”Oh, this was the great ploy of Satan in that kingdom of his: to display such blatant evil one could almost believe one’s own secret sin didn’t matter.”

  3. Emily clay Avatar
    Emily clay

    I noticed how descriptive you were.

    I liked that you explained that “even if you are a slave, you have freedom when you pass through the gates of heaven”.

    I wondered what other Bible verses could have been used as well.

    I would suggest adding more commas where needed.

    Strong words, phrases, or literary devices were” What makes the Hiding Place different is that it’s about putting your faith in God, not yourself”.

  4. Sarah Pring Avatar
    Sarah Pring

    I liked: The flow your essay had and how you walked the reader through everything. Also I liked your bible verse about having liberty through God.

    I noticed: you went into a lot of detail.

    I wondered: More about your thoughts on the theme of The Hiding Place.

    I would suggest double checking some of your grammar.

    Strong Words Phrases or literary devices: A similar thing about these stories is that there is hope through darkness. 

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