The Hiding Place and Caged Bird Essay by Jack Marr

Caged Bird is a poem written by Maya Angelou. It is about a bird who is trapped inside a cage. He is irritated and enraged at being stuck and longs for freedom. He dreams of being able to fly through the skies. Even though he is tied up, he sings every day about better days. 

The Hiding Place is a memoir written by Corrie Ten Boom. Corrie is a watchmaker who lives in the Netherlands with her family during World War Two. Her family harbors jews in their home to keep them safe from the Germans. When the Nazis raid her house, Corrie and her family hide the jews in a special hiding place in their house. Though they are taken to prison, they thank God for keeping the jews safe. Corrie and Betsie, her sister, are then transferred to a concentration camp where they face the horrible conditions of the disgusting camp and the grueling work it comes with. There they seek God more than ever and also long for freedom. 

These two compositions are similar in that both Corrie and the bird are confined in somewhere they do not want to be in. The bird is trapped inside a cage, and Corrie is imprisoned in a concentration camp. They both envision a better life ahead of them, and they both long for liberation. A difference in these works is their main themes. The main theme of Caged Bird is wanting freedom, while The Hiding Place is about Corrie’s life and how she sought God in her times of trouble. 

The bird obviously yearns to be free from the cage. The poem says a lot about freedom. “The caged bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still” – quote from Caged Bird. This passage says that freedom is exploring what you don’t know. The second half of The Hiding Place, where Corrie is in prison and concentration camps, also says a lot about freedom. “How can the soul prosper if it is always kept indoors?” – quote from The Hiding Place. This passage says that it is hard to grow, physically and spiritually, if you are not outside in God’s creation. 

2 Corinthians 3:17 – “Now the Lord is the Spirit, and where the Spirit of the Lord is, there is freedom.” God is always with us, and, according to the Bible verse, God brings freedom with Him. If you have a relationship with God, then you can have freedom. Even though Corrie was in a concentration camp, she still found joy and a sense of freedom through God and His Word. 


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3 responses to “The Hiding Place and Caged Bird Essay by Jack Marr”

  1. lucyabigailanton Avatar
    lucyabigailanton

    I liked that this was really structured and easy to read. There were no grammar mistakes.

    I noticed that you did a really good job describing the hiding place and gave a lot of important information about it!

    I wondered why you chose that bible verse. (It’s a really good one)

    I would suggest in this sentence, “This passage says that freedom is exploring what you don’t know.” that you give more detail about this. It’s really interesting to read about!

    Strong words or phrases were  If you have a relationship with God, then you can have freedom. Even though Corrie was in a concentration camp, she still found joy and a sense of freedom through God and His Word. 

  2. I liked how descriptive you were.

    I noticed how it’s as nicely written.

    I wondered why do you think freedom is exploring what you don’t know?

    I would suggest explaining more about how Corrie sought God in the last sentence in the third paragraph.

    strong words, phrases and literary devices were “He is irritated and enraged at being stuck and longs for freedom.”

  3. Emily clay Avatar
    Emily clay

    I noticed you used a good amount of vocabulary words.

    I liked the bible verse you chose it explains very well were to find freedom.

    I wondered are there any other Bible verses you could have chosen to use as well.

    I would suggest starting your paper with a quote or saying to draw in a reader’s attention.

    strong words phrases or literary devices were “God is always with us, and, according to the Bible verse, God brings freedom with Him. If you have a relationship with God, then you can have freedom”.

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